Today I spent a lot of time working on my presentation which needed many small upgrades. I then realized how much someone can accomplish with only a couple minutes of revising your presentation, also I learned the importance of peer editing. In my case I asked my dad to please revise my presentation. The reason I asked him was because I wanted my presentation to be a complete surprise and at the same time mystery to my peers. My dad advised me to make the audience feel much more comfortable listening to me and to have a clear idea of what I was talking about so I added a couple of important factors that really gave a twist to my whole presentation.